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So I decided to redo my old project. Now when I first started at GFXing, I made this wallpaper, it was known as Heartbreaker. It was made in Paint.NET. It is shown below:

https://2img.net/h/i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb288/brian4la/58911_434811274083_763069083_4899732_1593758_n.jpg

Now, I decided to remake it. I call it Heartbreaker 2.0. It is a different approach, more realistic, I suppose. More dark and distorted.

https://2img.net/h/i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb288/brian4la/heartbreaker2.png

Tell me what you think. Which one looks better, etc. Comments and constructive criticism are welcome.

I like the second one , only because its darker , heh.
And i cant give any criticism because i can do that stuff. so x.x

The second one, in my opinion, looks way better. But, the heart could stand out a bit more. It looks like it's being stomped on. Put more emphasis on the heart than the words.

Edit: Or well.. whichever one you were trying to show off. If it's both, then make them equally as noticeable. When I saw the picture, my eyes directed on the words (which I'm not sure if you wanted it to be directed on).

Tran wrote:The second one, in my opinion, looks way better. But, the heart could stand out a bit more. It looks like it's being stomped on. Put more emphasis on the heart than the words.

Edit: Or well.. whichever one you were trying to show off. If it's both, then make them equally as noticeable. When I saw the picture, my eyes directed on the words (which I'm not sure if you wanted it to be directed on).

Well yes, obviously. The second looks better, because the 1st one was made in my earlier days of Paint.NET. And yeah, I don't how to put more emphasis on the heart, couldn't think of a way. But the text is good to me.

Whatever fits your taste, Brian. <: And I guess try to put more.. contrast on the heart?

Criticism:
~First one: Too many dark spots around the sides and the heart sorta sinks in to much.
~Second one: maybe have more grey around the sides of the heart to seem like it's being taken over.
~Both: Maybe to emphasize the point of it being heartbroken, have a crack starting from the top.

Overall: I like second one better.